A Cat That Was Sleepy
One day a dog wanted play with the cat
so the dog gave the cat some coffee so
she will wake up so the cat and dog can
play together so they started to play tag
around the coach and the dog gave some
more coffee so they started to play a
video game and play some music with
the piano and drums the cat was playing
the piano and the dog was playing the
drums and so the cat started to get really
really crazy and when they started to
keep playing there own music i think
that they made the cat started to bang its
head on the piano Bang Bang Bang and
so they started to play another game but
this time the cat got really angry and
started to break the controller to play
the game and so the kitten asked for
some more coffee so he ran into the
kitchen to give her more but and he saw
that there were no more coffee he
cheeked everywhere and he found some
coffee but the dog went outside to trade
the koowalla a tea leaf for the dogs
collar so he ran back inside to give the
cat the coffee so he gave it to her and
the cat was slowly going to sleep and so
the dog walked over to see if the cat
was asleep and the dog fell asleep as
well so they both fell asleep on the floor
and there owner came home and saw
that her house was a mess and saw that
her pets were asleep on the floor and she
walked over to her pets and the dog woke
up and the dog gave her a Thumbs up.
so the dog gave the cat some coffee so
she will wake up so the cat and dog can
play together so they started to play tag
around the coach and the dog gave some
more coffee so they started to play a
video game and play some music with
the piano and drums the cat was playing
the piano and the dog was playing the
drums and so the cat started to get really
really crazy and when they started to
keep playing there own music i think
that they made the cat started to bang its
head on the piano Bang Bang Bang and
so they started to play another game but
this time the cat got really angry and
started to break the controller to play
the game and so the kitten asked for
some more coffee so he ran into the
kitchen to give her more but and he saw
that there were no more coffee he
cheeked everywhere and he found some
coffee but the dog went outside to trade
the koowalla a tea leaf for the dogs
collar so he ran back inside to give the
cat the coffee so he gave it to her and
the cat was slowly going to sleep and so
the dog walked over to see if the cat
was asleep and the dog fell asleep as
well so they both fell asleep on the floor
and there owner came home and saw
that her house was a mess and saw that
her pets were asleep on the floor and she
walked over to her pets and the dog woke
up and the dog gave her a Thumbs up.
I love the story, it sounds like a very funny movie. It would be really cool if you added the video link.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Angel-Rose and I go to Tautoro School.I was amazed with how much information you had chosen to put in your story.But Next time you should put in fullstops and adjectives to make it a better story. but well done.Blog you later
ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Violet from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked Your story it was really different.
I learnt that dogs and cats could play tag.
Maybe you could fikse up your first sentes to make it make sense.
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KIA Ora Anahera my name is jordanjames I like the story about the dog giving the cat heaps of coffee and went crazy and hit his head on the piano and the dog ran out of coffee and asked the Kuala bear for a tea leaf for his collar. maybe next time you can add a funny ending. bye have a good weekend
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ReplyDeleteHello Anahera i'm Ricardo I come from Paihia school and i'm 12 years old. I really liked your blog post about the dog and the cat, I thought it was really cool and funny how the dog keeps on giving the cat coffee. The bit I liked the most is the bit when the cat smacks his head against the piano 6 times. It would helpful if you make the words smaller next time. Keep up the good work bye.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Anahera, I’m Zara a year 6 student at Paihia Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI really like your story about a cat that is lazy because it is really funny. When I was reading it I ran out of breath it would be great if you could edit it and add punctuation! Other then that I enjoyed your writing. Do you like cats or dogs more?
unbelievable!
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